Forever Friday:
"It's okay, senorita," the woman said, slowly prying my fingers free of her arm. "We've landed."
Needle's Eye:
Her father's footsteps had faded down the hallway before she found her voice again. "They don't."
Revision:
And we never, ever bite the hand that feeds us.
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14 comments:
Ooh, these hint at some very intense stuff. Well done!!
I like that first one the best. Paints a funny picture, at least out of context.
What I love about these is that they imply some really tense scenes happened to get your characters there. Good job.
I like the third one ;) Though somehow it makes me think it's a rule to be broken...
I liked that last one, very cool :)
Sounds like me the first time I flew...Forever Friday still wins for me!
These are all great, esp 3!
So much voice in those voices! Nicely done!
Great endings to all your first chapters. I really like Needle's Eye. It really makes you wonder what's going on with the dad.
Thanks for participating!!!
I really like the first one 'cause it tells us so much about what happened in the chapter, even though we haven't read the rest of the chapter (well, maybe the first line...somewhere...sometime. hehe). But my fave is the last one!
that last one is the greatest. they all make me want to know more! great job!
Oh, I can't pick! They're all so great! Very intense and I'd for sure have to keep reading.
Good advice on that last one :)
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